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MLP: A Battle Returns Idea

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Chrysalis comes back to Equestria, and the first pony she attacks it Twilight Sparkle. Transforming into Twilight and hiding Twilight under her own house, Chrysalis now does everything Twilight does. Spike, knowing something is different goes to stay with Rarity, while Trinity stays to try and figure something out.

When Twilight/Chrysalis is asked to see Princess Celestia at Canterlot, she goes there, and receives an almost "special" gift from the Princess, but in complete and utter shock, runs away when Luna comes in.

Chrysalis soon finds out why Twilight has so much love around her. When Twilight finds a way to break free, she runs to Celestia first. Celestia is shocked by seeing Twilight so hurt, weakened, and distraught looking. Celestia had just called Twilight over to see if she was fine, and that's when Chrysalis as Twilight walks in.

The two fight, and when the real Twilight is beaten by Chrysalis, Celestia see's Twilight's friends come in, and that's when Celestia realizes that the Twilight she had been seeing was a fake. Chrysalis almost takes them all out, but Twilight regains her strength, but suddenly loses control of her power.

Will Twilight defeat Chrysalis with how much love Chrysalis has fed on? Will Twilight return to normal? Will Twilight turn on her friends? Can Celestia calm down Twilight? What will happen next?
This is another idea I've had in my head for awhile, and I decided I should probably post this because this is a 'High Maybe' story I really am thinking of doing.

I've been in a huge Pony mood lately, drawing pony after pony after pony, and pony idea after pony idea. Man, ponies took over my life.

...Is that a bad thing? Anyways, tell me if it sounds like a good story?
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Ooooh, I'm interested=D